✍️ IELTS Writing Task 1 Academic Band 7+
шаблоны, структуры, фразы
📋 Структура ответа для Band 7+
| Часть | Что писать | Примерный объем |
|---|
| Introduction | Перефразированное задание | 1 предложение |
| Overview | Главные тренды, самые заметные особенности | 2-3 предложения |
| Body 1 | Детали первой группы данных | 3-4 предложения |
| Body 2 | Детали второй группы данных | 3-4 предложения |
💡 Важно: В Task 1 не нужен отдельный conclusion — только overview после введения. Без хорошего overview невозможно получить выше Band 5 за Task Achievement.
✍️ Introduction (Введение) — шаблоны
базовые замены
The graph shows → illustrates / depicts / presents
The table gives information about → provides data on / compares
The chart shows the number of → reveals the quantity of
для графика
The line graph illustrates the changes in [что] over a period of [время].
The bar chart compares [что] in terms of [категория] in [место].
для таблицы
The table gives a breakdown of [что] by [категория].
для процесса
The diagram illustrates how [something] is produced / works.
для карты
The maps show the development of [place] between [year] and [year].
Полезные синонимы: shows → illustrates, depicts, demonstrates, compares; number → figure, data, proportion, rate; people → individuals, residents, population; between 2000-2020 → from 2000 to 2020, over a 20-year period.
📊 Overview — самый важный абзац
как начать
Overall, ...
In general, ...
It is clear that ...
It can be seen that ...
To summarise, ...
что писать
✔ главный тренд (рост/падение/стабильность)
✔ самые высокие/низкие значения
✔ основные различия между категориями
✔ количество этапов (для процесса)
пример (тренды)
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the numbers of people employed have increased over the period, whereas the unemployed figures have remained stable.
пример (сравнение)
In brief, Germany was the major producer of vehicles over this period followed by France and Norway.
пример (процесс)
It can be seen that there are four main stages to car manufacturing. To be specific, these are moulding, machining, joining and shearing.
📈 Описание трендов (увеличение/уменьшение)
📈 глаголы
Рост: increase, rise, grow, climb, surge
Падение: decrease, fall, drop, decline, plummet, plunge
Стабильность: remain stable, level off, plateau
📉 существительные
an increase, a rise, a growth, a surge, a decrease, a fall, a drop, a dramatic fall, a plateau
⚡ наречия + прилагательные
significantly / significant, dramatically / dramatic, sharply / sharp, slightly / slight, moderately / moderate, gradually / gradual, considerably / considerable
конструкции
Глагол+наречие: The number grew significantly from 2,545 to 5,115.Прил+сущ:There was a significant growth in the number…
🔄 Сравнение данных
X was significantly higher than Y.
X outnumbered Y by [число].
X and Y were almost the same, at [число] and [число] respectively.
There was a considerable difference between X and Y.
X accounted for the largest proportion.
X was closely followed by Y.
In contrast, ... / Similarly, ... / Compared to X, Y is ... / While X increased, Y decreased.
📐 Описание долей и процентов (pie charts)
X accounted for [%] of ...Coal accounted for 45% of energy production.
X made up [%] of ...Renewables made up only 5% of the total.
X represented [%] of ...
The largest share was ...
приблизительно
approximately / roughly / about / close to / in the region of
точно
exactly 25%, precisely, just over 50%, just under
⏱ Описание временных периодов
from 2010 to 2020 / between 2010 and 2020
over a 10-year period / over a decade
over a 10-year period commencing in 2010 / concluding in 2020
every 3 years between 2011 and 2020
in 2015 compared to 2025 / in 2015 in contrast to 10 years later
🏭 Описание процессов
последовательность
First(ly), ... / To begin with, ...
The first step is when...
Next, ... / Then, ...
After that, ...
Subsequently, ...
The next stage involves...
At the same time, ...
Finally, ... / In the final stage, ...
пассивный залог
The raw materials are collected and transported.
Once the product has been assembled, it is inspected.
📝 Полный шаблон ответа для графика
Paragraph 1 — Introduction
The line graph illustrates the number of [что] in [где] between [год] and [год].
Paragraph 2 — Overview
Overall, it is clear that [главный тренд 1]. Additionally, [главный тренд 2].
Paragraph 3 — Body 1
Looking first at [категория A], [детали]. It started at [число] in [год] before rising/falling to [число] in [год]. [Another detail].
Paragraph 4 — Body 2
Turning to [категория B], a different pattern can be seen. [детали]. In contrast, [категория C] remained relatively stable.
✅ готовый пример
The line graph illustrates the number of international tourists visiting three different regions in Europe between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, it is clear that tourist numbers increased in all three regions, with Region A consistently attracting the highest number. Notably, Region C overtook Region B in the final years.
Looking first at Region A, the number stood at approximately 50 million in 2000. This figure rose steadily, reaching a peak of 80 million in 2010. Following a slight drop to 75 million in 2015, it recovered to 85 million by 2020.
Turning to Region B, starting at 40 million in 2000, the figure experienced a dramatic increase to 70 million in 2005, before fluctuating considerably. In contrast, Region C showed modest growth from 20 million to 35 million, after which it climbed sharply to overtake Region B at 50 million in 2020.
❌ Чего НЕ нужно делать
- ❌ Не описывай каждую деталь — выбирай главные тренды.
- ❌ Не давай причин — только описывай данные, не объясняй почему.
- ❌ Не используй bullet points — только связный текст.
- ❌ Не копируй задание — всегда перефразируй.
- ❌ Не забудь overview — без него выше Band 5 не подняться.
🎯 Полезные фразы — шпаргалка
| Ситуация | Фразы |
|---|
| Начать введение | The graph/table/chart illustrates/shows/compares... |
| Начать overview | Overall, / In general, / It is clear that... |
| Рост | increase, rise, grow, climb, surge |
| Падение | decrease, fall, drop, decline, plummet |
| Стабильность | remain stable, level off, plateau, stay constant |
| Сравнение | compared to, in contrast, similarly, while, whereas |
| Доля | accounted for, made up, represented, constituted |
| Приблизительно | approximately, roughly, about, in the region of |
| Время | from X to Y, between X and Y, over the period |
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